Question

【题目】感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多快乐。假设你将参加主题为“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。

要点：

1. 感恩对象（父母、老师、朋友…）；

2. 为何感恩；

3. 如何感恩。

注意：

1. 只能选择一个感恩对象；

2. 词数120左右。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is

“Thank you, ___________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”

My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement. She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m very grateful to have such a caring mother.

Now, I have a message for everyone here, including myself: since we have grown up, we children should try to repay our dear mum instead of always trying to receive something from her. We can help her as she helps us. Sometimes even a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her will shine her through.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于演讲稿，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、要依据提示信息或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以加入个人真实情感，旨在感情饱满，打动观众。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement.是非限制性定语从句且用动词ing作状语。She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily是宾语从句；She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible.运用平行结构；whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up.让步状语从句等。此外，文章还使用了大量短语和词组have the opportunity to… , devotes oneself to , look after，make sure，as…as possible，On top of that，cheer up等使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。