Question

3．假设你是李华，你要给十年后的自己写一封信，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）业余生活．
注意：（1）次数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Li Hua，
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（业余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本题属于提纲类作文．你要给十年后的自己写一封信，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）业余生活，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，内容充实．在写作时要注意本文使用的应该是一般将来时，也要注意多种句式的使用．
这是一篇向报社投稿的文章．材料中已经给出了要点：家庭，工作和生活．因此围绕着这三点进行构思写作．首先按照顺序描写未来的家庭，然后写工作，最后想象业余生活．这样行文就比较流畅，自然，符合写作的要求等．
本文使用了一些高级的词汇和短语：get along  with sb与某人相处；in one's free time在某人的空闲的时候；such as 例如；continue to do sth继续做某事；in a word 总之
【高分句型】
1．I'will ①do a good job in②whatever I do．
①do a good job in在某方面做的好．
②whatever I do．作为介词in的宾语从句．
2．①In a word，my life will be ②much richer and more colorful．
①in a word 总之．
②much修饰比较级，表程度．

解答 Dear Li Hua，
        I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（业余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．