题目内容
Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class while the teacher suddenly slip and fell. We were all wor?ried about her. One of the boy carried her on the back,under the help of some others,to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was breaking and she had to stay in hospital. The following day,we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her laying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. Lucky enough,this Thurs?day she returned back to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were both deeply moved and proud of hav?ing such a responsible teacher.
改正后:Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all wor?ried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back,under the help of some others,to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was breaken and she had to stay in hospital. The following day,we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. Luckily enough,this Thurs?day she returned to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of hav?ing such a responsible teacher.