Question

假设你是李华，你所在的班级最近举办了一次主题为“Learn to Be Thankful(学会感恩)”的演讲比赛。请用英语写一篇短文介绍这次活动，内容包含如下要点：

1.班主任发表主题演讲，号召同学们学会感恩；

2.同学们以自身的经历为例，表达对父母的爱和感谢；

3.你自己的感受……

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可以增加适当情节以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Recently a speech contest was held in my class under the theme of “Learn to Be Thankful”.Our head teacher made a speech at first and called on all the students to learn to be thankful.Then some students told us their stories between them and their parents.Some were so touching that many of us were moved to tears.At last we students all expressed our love and thanks to our parents.

I learned a lot from the activity.We get love from others,so we should also give our love back to people around us,including our parents,our teachers,and our friends.Maybe we can only do some small things for them.If everyone dedicates a little love to others,the world will become more wonderful.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的东西，考生不难理解写作的目的和要求。考生重点应认真审题，审题包括几个方面:1.文章的时态2.内容要点。尤其内容要点的把握准确到位。你所在的班级最近举办了一次主题为“Learn to Be Thankful(学会感恩)”的演讲比赛，这句话其实也是一个要点，有的考生把它给漏掉了。3.考生要尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数

考点：考查学生运用语言的能力和语言的组织能力

点评：写英语作文，当然基本功很重要，好的英语作文中肯定必不可少的得有长句和复合句，这只能靠考生平时的练习。但是，有时候即使句子写得很好，但分数还是不够高。其实，说到底，是因为考生的英语作文中缺少闪光点，句子写得很好，但是嚼之无味，很难把作文分数提上去。