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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In recent years，the square dance in China had become very popular．Whether in the early morning and after supper，you can see many people，especial elderly women，gather together to dance to music．Listening to pleasant music，people feel relaxing and happy．With its benefits know to the public，more people begin to join the activity．
Here are some reason for its popularity．On the one hand，the Chinese people's living standards have greatly improved during the past decades and people have more than time and energy to enjoy ourselves．On the other hand，the square dance is really an good way for people to keep fit．

分析本文主要介绍广场舞在中国很受欢迎．其原因是：一方面，人们的生活水平提高了，人们有更多的时间和精力来玩得高兴．一方面，广场舞确实是保持人们身体健康的一种好方法．

解答 In recent years，the square dance in China had become very popular．Whether in the early morning and after supper，you can see many people，especial elderly women，gather together to dance to music．Listening to pleasant music，people feel relaxing and happy．With its benefits know to the public，more people begin to join∧the activity．
Here are some reason for its popularity．On the one hand，the Chinese people's living standards have greatly improved during the past decades and people have more than time and energy to enjoy ourselves．On the other hand，the square dance is really an good way for people to keep fit．
详解：
1．had改为has 考查动词时态．根据句中时间状语In recent years，要用现在完成时态，因主语the square dance是单数形式，助动词用has．
2．and改为or 考查固定搭配．whether…or…意为"是…还是…；或者…或者…；不是…就是…"，是固定搭配．
3．especial改为especially 考查副词．especially在句中可修饰名词、动词、形容词、介词短语等，一般说来，especially多半要放在它所修饰的那个词的前面．
4．relaxing改为relaxed 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
5．know改为known 考查过去分词．此处是"with+名词+过去分词"复合结构，benefits与know之间是动宾关系，用过去分词作宾语补足语．
6．加in 考查词语用法．join in意为"参加；加入"，是固定搭配．join指加入某组织，成为其中一员．
7．reason改为reasons 考查名词复数．根据句中谓语动词are用了复数形式，主语reason也应用复数形式．
8．去掉than 考查词语用法．根据句意：人们有更多的时间和精力来玩得高兴．用more修饰time和energy．
9．ourselves改为themselves 考查代词．themselves指代people．
10．an改为a 考查冠词．way是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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