题目内容
【题目】你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。请你根据下面所给要点写一篇英语短文。
1.你梦想的工作(1点);
2.你的兴趣或特长(两点);
3.该工作的重要性(两点)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
As a senior three student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future.
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【答案】
As a senior three student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future. ①Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.
②First, I'm an energetic outgoing girl/boy with great patience. That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion. ③Besides, I am crazy about the English language, and I am doing quite well. ④Above all, teachers are generally respected and wellpaid. With two vacations each year, I may enjoy more relaxing time. ⑤As a responsible girl/boy, I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.
⑥In short, I'll work even harder to become a popular English teacher.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。该文可分三段式,首先要指出自己梦想的工作,第二段讲自己能够承担这份工作的理由和该工作的重要性,第三段总结。写作过程中可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文采用三段式,要点突出,结构严谨,布局合理,句中使用高级句子。Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.现在分词作时间状语;That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion.句中运用表语从句;teachers are generally respected and well-paid.被动语态用在句中;I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society.定语从句巧妙运用;Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.动名词作主语;另外,First, Besides, Above all, With two vacations each year, As a responsible girl/boy, In short的使用为文章增色添彩。