Question

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

As Teachers’ Day draws near, many Chinese parents have been thinking hard over gifts that are appropriate for the teachers of their children. Some have turned to the Internet for gift suggestions, including a mother named Yang whose child attends kindergarten. “What should I send and what kinds of gifts are appropriate? We are in a difficult situation---we cannot afford very expensive gifts, but teachers will not be impressed if the gifts are too cheap,” Yang wrote on a website.

Some parents, however, do not realize that some teaches are also under great pressure because of the gifts. “No more gifts, or I will run out of money!” complained a young teacher on Weibo.” Many parents send me some shopping tickets for Teachers’ Day so I put them in a new dictionary and let their children bring them back to their parents,’ the teacher wrote. A teacher named Zhu, said he feels “worried” every time parents send him money or shopping tickets. “It is not whether to accept the gifts, but how to return them that worries me. I tried to persuade parents to take them back. But I will use the money or shopping tickets from the stubborn parents to buy books for the class,” said Zhu.

 [写作内容]

1．  以约30个词概括以上短文的内容；

2．  以约120个词就“教师节家长是否该给老师送礼”这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括：

（1）       说说你对该问题的看法，并简单说明原因；

（2）       谈谈你印象最深的一次教师节；

（3）       谈谈你所认为学生给老师的最好的教师节礼物。

[写作要求]

1．  作文中可使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；标题自拟。

2．  作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

When Teachers’ Day approaches　(is at the corner),  lots of parents bother about what gifts to send to impress their children’s teachers. However, some teachers are thinking hard about how to send the gifts back.

     As far as I’m concerned, parents shouldn’t spend much money buying gifts for teachers on Teachers’ Day. It bothers both parents and teachers. Besides, it makes students feel uneasy at school.

     The Teachers’ Day that impresses me most was the one in 2010. All our class agreed that nothing could be more precious and meaningful to the teachers than things that were made with own hands. Every one of our class made a small gift. Some drew cartoons, some wrote poems, and some recorded songs sung by themselves. When receiving the gifts, the teachers were so amazed and moved and promised to always keep them.

     As students, it is not the presents we send, but our sincere wishes that matter. As long as our wishes are sincere, the teachers can feel them.

【解析】在写本文之前，一定要细细看过上面的文章，从上文中概括出主要内容，但不能原封不动的抄下来。然后根据要求对此现象发表你的看法。记录自己印象最深的一个教师节，最后概括自己认为最好的教师节礼物是什么。本文重要的笔墨应放在举例说明上，而最后一段，应一两句话即可。注意使用恰当连词连接句子，使语篇连贯。