题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你市将举办留学生汉语演讲比赛,主题为“我眼中的中国”(China in my eyes)。请给在你校留学的Jonah写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1. 演讲主题;
2. 比赛时间和地点;
3. 邀请他代表你校参加。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jonah,
Knowing that you show interest in Chinese culture,I’m writing to invite you to a Chinese speech contest designed for exchange students in our city.
The contest,whose theme is“China in my eyes”,will be held in the City Library on July 18th,2020. Since you have made great progress in learning Chinese,why not take part in this activity as a representative of our school? I’m sure that you will have a good performance in the contest.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请留学生参加汉语演讲比赛。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信目的
2.介绍相关情况
1)演讲主题。(theme of the contest)
2)比赛时间和地点。(time and place of the contest)
3) 邀请他代表你校参加。(invitation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
show interest in; Chinese culture; designed for; made great progress; why not; take part in; representative; be sure that; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing that you show interest in Chinese culture
2. I’m writing to invite you to a Chinese speech contest designed for exchange students in our city.
3. Since you have made great progress in learning Chinese
4. why not take part in this activity as a representative of our school?
5. I’m sure that you will have a good performance in the contest.
6. Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
