题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,目前在新西兰作交换生。不久前,你在当地旅行社预定了“澳大利亚八日游”,但因故需要取消出游计划。请你给该旅行社负责人写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明情况。 2.表示歉意。 3.询问是否能退回订金。
注意:1. 字数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:旅行社travel agency;取消cancel;订金deposit.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student here in New Zealand.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student here in New Zealand. I booked an 8-day holiday to Australia in your agency last week. But now I am sorry to tell you that I must cancel my booking.
I was really looking forward to enjoying the holiday. However, I was informed this morning that I would not be able to take those days off as planned. I have to attend an activity held by my school to raise money for the poor, which can really help them a lot. I do apologize for not letting you know earlier. I hope this will not cause you any problems.
Besides, I would be very grateful if you could let me know whether I can get my deposit back at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】李华目前在新西兰作交换生,不久前,在当地旅行社预定了“澳大利亚八日游”,但因故需要取消出游计划。现给该旅行社负责人写一封邮件说明此事。邮件分三部分:先说明情况,自己不能按计划出游;然后表示歉意,最好说明原因;最后询问是否能退回订金。文章用一般过去时和一般现在时来写,以第一人称为主。
写作时要条理清楚,态度诚恳,要点全面。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用,如宾语从句that I must cancel my booking. that I would not be able to take those days off as planned.和whether I can get my deposit back定语从句which can really help them a lot.