题目内容
15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：把缺词处加-个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
One evening two young man were walking in the street together．They tried to find a chance to steal everything．The clock struck twelve．Most of the people were in bed．Quickly they came to a house and it seemed everyone in the house had fallen asleep．Standing at the front gate，one man whispered in English to the other at a low voice，"You wait here and I'll go around to the back door and then get into the house．"Suddenly out of the house ran a dog，barked at them．The two men was very frightened and ran away as fast as possibly．They didn't stop until they get to a lonely place．The man said to the other in a surprise，"It's too bad，but I hadn't thought what the dog could understand English．"
分析 本文讲述的是一则幽默故事；一天傍晚，两个年轻人走在街上，寻找着偷东西的机会；当时钟敲响十二点，人们都已经睡熟了的时候，他们迅速来到一所房子的前门；当其中的一个人用英语小声说了一句"你在这儿等着，我绕到后门，然后进到房子里"之后，不料却窜出一条狗来，对着他们大叫，两个人吓得立刻逃跑了；说话的人惊奇地认为：太糟糕了，但他怎么也没想到狗能听懂英语．
解答 One evening two young man were walking in the street together．
They tried to find a chance to steal everything．The clock struck
twelve．Most of the people were in bed．Quickly they came to a
house and it seemed∧everyone in the house had fallen asleep．
Standing at the front gate，one man whispered in English to the
other at a low voice，"You wait here and I'll go around to the back
door and then get into the house．"Suddenly out of the house ran a
dog，barked at them．The two men was very frightened and ran away
as fast as possibly．They didn't stop until they get to a lonely place．
The man said to the other in a surprise，"It's too bad，but I hadn't
thought what the dog could understand English．"
详解：
1．man改为men 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是两个年轻人，由于man是可数名词，故用men．
2．everything改为something 考查句意理解以及不定代词 本句的意思是：他们试图找机会来偷些东西；此处指的是：一些东西，而不是所有的东西；故用something．
3．在seemed后加that 考查固定句型结构 it seemed/seems that意为：好像，似乎；故在seemed后加that．
4．at改为in 考查固定短语 in a low voice意为：低声说；故用in．
5．barked改为barking 考查现在分词 此处在句中作伴随状语，由于动词bark与其逻辑主语 a dog构成主谓关系，故用现在分词barking．
6．was改为were 考查主谓一致 由于此处的主语The two men 指的是两个男人，故用were．
7．possibly改为possible 考查固定搭配 as…as possible意为：尽可能…；故用possible．
8．get改为got 考查时态 根据上文可知，此处讲的是发生在一天夜里的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用got．
9．去掉surprise之前的a 考查固定短语 in surprise 意为：惊奇地；故去掉surprise之前的a．
10．what改为that 考查连接词 连接代词what通常在名词性从句中作主语或宾语，而此处用来引导宾语从句，由于该从句中不缺少任何成分，故用连接词that．
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．
