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IV. 写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

以下是一位学生对英国出版社英语教材的反馈意见表，请根据要求写一篇英语短文，寄回英国出版社。

姓名	李华	联系电话	0750--567890
学校	耀华中学	电子邮箱	Lihua2009@yahoo.com
教材评价	主要优点	话题覆盖面广，涉及文化、历史、地理、科技等
主要缺点	部分句子表达深奥；语法如定语从句在某些课文中出现过于频繁, 显得生硬
建议	语法顺序由浅入深，先介绍句子基本成分；再学习复合句；增加与单元话题相关的阅读材料

【写作要求】

1．5个句子介绍表格中对教材的评价内容。

2．将5个句子组织成连贯的短文，使用必要的连接词。

3．头和结尾已经给出，不计入句子数。

参考词汇：定语从句:attributive clause       复合句: compound clause

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear editors:

I am Li Hua from Class Ten Senior One of Yaohua Middle School. My opinions about the textbook are as follows:

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I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.

Please contact me at 0750—567890 or Lihua1995@yahoo.com

Best wishes!

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

First of all, what is good about the textbook is that it covers various subjects such as culture, history, geography and modern science and technology. But there are too many attributive clauses crowded in one passage, which does not seem natural. Besides, some of the sentences are too complicated to understand. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to say that the basic and simple sentence structures should come before the compound clauses in the aspect of grammar starting from easy level. At the same time, there should be more reading materials related to the topic of each unit.

【解析】略