Question

假设你是育才中学学生会主席（Chair of the Student Union）李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2：00－5：00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话44876655） 欢迎大家光临

         注意：词数100左右。

         Dear Ms. Smith,

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                     With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Ms Smith,

         I’m Li Hua. Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. I’m writing to invite you  to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1^st.  It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches  on  the  given  topic “Man and  the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560. if you have any questions.

         I am looking forward to your reply.

                                                                 With best wishes,

                                                                          Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求让你给评委写信，因此本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。本信涉及的生词不多，根据线索和信函要求，学生容易组织材料。适当的延展个别细节再加上所给的提示，考生注意写清楚以下几点：1.主题，2. 时间，3. 地点，4. 参赛选手，5. 恰当的结尾，就能较好的发挥出来。当然在书写上，要干净整洁的卷面与字数要求，一般能达到较高的分数。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如writing to，invite you  to，last for, deliver their speeches，accept our invitation，looking forward to；还运用了Chair  of  the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which  is close to your University. which引导的非限制性定语从句; We hope you will accept our invitation  if  it  is convenient for you. if引导的条件状语从句；Please call me at 446765560.引用了祈使句等等。

考点：提纲作文