Question

书面表达（满分30分）

随着生活节奏（pace of life）的加快和学习生活的日益紧张（stressful）,越来越多的人吃速食食品诸如方便面，腌制食品（preserved food/processed food）等来替代正餐。一方面，这些食品的确能够节省时间，帮助大家更快完成工作和学习任务，还是零售(retail)行业的一大支柱；另一方面，它们的安全性和营养性令人担忧。请你以普通学生的身份对学校校报写一篇讨论如何对待速食食品的文章，内容应当包括以下几点：

1.速食食品的利弊

2.你的观点

字数以100字左右为宜。

Dear Editor,

Today, I contribute to our paper only wanting to talk about the fast food in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,  

Today, I contribute to our paper only wanting to talk about the fast food in our life. Fast food is becoming more and more popular, especially among children and teenagers. Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food. There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is quick and convenient. You can satisfy your hunger instantly. Precious time won't be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive. Second, its popularity is also attributed to the combined ingredients in them, which, the companies say, will do good to your health. 

However, I think that fast food isn't healthy enough because it does not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition. Doctors suggest that people should avoid eating too much fast food. Although home cooking is time-consuming and following washing-up tiresome, it offers healthy and delicious meals your body likes and needs. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作分三方面进行写作，首先对速食食品的流行进行说明，对它的流行原因进行说明，如它是方便快捷的it is quick and convenient.能够节约你宝贵的时间，第二一些商家说这些食品对身体也是有益的，然后对速食食品的弊端进行描写，如没有含有平衡的饮食not compose a balanced diet，营养不足is low in nutrition.最后表达自己的观点，尽管在家做饭是费时的Although home cooking is time-consuming 但是它是健康有营养的，速食食品仅仅只是在你非常匆忙没有时间的时候才吃Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文的写作有一定难度，对于议论文文体，对文章的条理性要把握好，在写作过程注意使用“起承转合”的词语或是句型表达，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。