Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国,他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:

1.推荐礼物:旗袍、中国结等;

2.推荐原因:

3.表达祝福。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:旗袍Qipao;中国结Chinese knot

Dear Peter，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I’m writing to give you some advice.

Personally I think you should buy the following gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese woman can show the real beauty of a woman. I’m sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, It’s also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It’s usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.

Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华。你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国,他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:1.推荐礼物:旗袍、中国结等;2.推荐原因:3.表达祝福。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：want to buy some gifts（想买一些礼物）；writing to give you some advice（写信给你一些建议）；represents good luck（代表好运气）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。