Question

Today is Teachers’ Day. I attended to a celebration	86.______
meeting held by our school. On the meeting, twenty-five	87.______
advancing teachers were praised and those	88.______
that had completed thirty years of teaching	89.______
was given medals. My first teacher was one of	90.______
those praised. After the meeting, my classmates	91.______
or I went to see him. Seeing us, the grey-haired teacher	92.______
looked excited. When we said we both wanted to be	93.______
teachers and devoted ourselves education in the	94.______
future, he said with a firm voice, “Teaching is a noble job.”	95.______

Answer 1

86. 去掉to。attend to意为“照顾、关心”；attend意为“参加”，是及物动词，后面直接加宾语。

87. On改为At。at the meeting意为“在会上”，是介词的习惯用法。

88. advancing改为advanced。advanced意为“先进的”。

89. that改为who。先行词是those, anyone, anybody等词时，关系代词应该用who。

90. 第一个was改为were。其主语是those，动词应用复数形式。

91. 正确。

92. or改为and。表示并列关系应用连词and。

93. both改为all。both指“两者”，all指“三者（或三者以上）”。

94. ourselves后加to。devote oneself to…意为“献身于……”。

95. with改为in。“用……什么声音”应用介词in，如in a low/loud voice。