Question

2．下面一组图片展现了现代生活方式．请根据你对这组图片的理解用英语写一篇短文．

你的短文应包含以下内容：
（1）简要描述图片的内容；（2）分析该现象的原因；（3）结合生活实际，谈谈你的感想．
注意：（1）可参照图片适当发挥；（2）作文词数150左右；
（3）作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息针对现代生活方式发表自己的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）简要描述图片的内容；（2）分析该现象的原因；（3）结合生活实际，谈谈你的感想．2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：文章使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句As is vividly shown in the cartoon，modern life has been dominated by computers；还有what引导的主语从句Even when he sleeps，what is in his dream is still the computer；还有why引导的定语从句The reasons why modern people are tied up with computers are as follows；另外还有恰当的过渡词On the one hand…on the other hand…一方面，另一方面；Hence因此；After all毕竟

解答 As is vividly shown in the cartoon，modern life has been dominated by computers．（高分句型）Whether a person is working，studying or playing，he is always staying in front of a computer．Even when he sleeps，what is in his dream is still the computer．（高分句型）
    The reasons why modern people are tied up with computers are as follows．On the one hand，there is no denying that the computer is currently the most efficient tool to meet the needs of their work or to entertain themselves．But on the other hand，many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues．（高分句型）
     Hence，it's necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way．After all，the computer is invented to connect you and me，and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach．（高分句型）（150词）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．