Question

20．假如你是李华，你的姐姐将在6月参加高考．最近你收到她的来信，得知她现在学习非常忙碌，心理压力很大．请你给她回信，内容主要包括：
1．对她目前的处境表示理解和关心；
2．就她的学习和生活情况提出具体建议，帮她缓解压力，提高学习效率；
3．鼓励她乐观自信地面对挑战，并表达良好祝愿．
写作要求：
1．请按要点展开联想，适当发挥，与题目要点不相关的内容不给分；
2．词数100词左右．
Dear sister，
How is everything？I have learned from your letter that you are very busy these days．And I am very glad that you have made great progress in your study．
With the College Entrance Examination approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．You should keep a balanced diet and have a good rest when you feel tired．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．You can talk to your teachers or your classmates and ask for help from them if necessary．
I am sure that you will make much more progress if you follow my advice．May you succeed，with my best wishes!
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是写给要参加高考的姐姐的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一了解她现在的情况；二对她目前的处境表示理解和关心；三就她的学习和生活情况提出具体建议；四鼓励她乐观自信地面对挑战，并表达良好祝愿．高分句型：1．With the College Entrance Examination  approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．句子里With+名词 the College Entrance Examination+现在分词 approaching构成with的复合结构，做原因状语；bearing much pressure不上"忍受压力"； am very concerned about 表示"为…担心"．随着高考的临近，你肯定正在忍受很大的压力，我非常担心你的情况．2．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．句子里动名词短语Doing sports and listening to some music做主语，good ways to表示"做某事的好方法"； keep you relaxed表示"让你保持放松"．做运动，听音乐是让你保持放松的好方法．

解答 Dear sister，
    How is everything？I have learned from your letter that you are very busy these days．And I am very glad that you have made great progress in your study．（了解她现在的情况）
   With the College Entrance Examination  approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．【高分句型一】（对她目前的处境表示理解和关心）You should keep a balanced diet and have a good rest when you feel tired．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．【高分句型二】You can talk to your teachers or your classmates and ask for help from them if necessary．（就她的学习和生活情况提出具体建议，）
   I am sure that you will make much more progress if you follow my advice and have more confidence．May you succeed，with my best wishes!（鼓励她乐观自信地面对挑战，并表达良好祝愿．）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li  Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文一般给出的要点比较完整，所以，首先要根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇．在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚．