Question

书面表达(满分25分):

假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。

自然情况	①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就	②经济发展迅速 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。
存在问题	④水、空气污染　　⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法	⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

　2．词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

参考词汇：经济economy n．

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

Yours，

Xiao Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changiiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Xiaohua

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求学生写一篇应用文，其内容是以介绍自己家乡江城给笔友写一封回信。信的开头和结尾已经给出，所以只需考虑题干中给出的内容即可，选用的人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。

在写作时，主要把题干给出的内容交代清楚，适当的拓展，但不要拓展的太多，语言要规范、准确，要得体；选词要丰富，适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式，如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等，确保写作信息的含量；注意过度与衔接，确保行文连贯，提高写作的质量。

写作时可能会用到的单词和短语：develop，available，pollution，on the bank of ，in the past ten years，heavy traffic，in my opinion，so that，in future等。

考点：要求学生写一篇应用文。

点评：本题中等难度。英语考试中写应用文时要注意根据写作的对象，写出必要的客套用语（一句话就够用了，从这句话可以看出你是给人写信还是写回信）。根据题目要求（判断出是议论文，说明文还是其它文体），并按某种文体写主体内容（注意：题目如果给了开头那么你要写的内容应该和前面讲的某种文体模式是一样的）。