题目内容
4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从笫11处起）不计分．
Nowadays we can still see some behaviors against public morals．As was often the case，people tend to talk loud in public places，annoyed others around．Spitting and littering rubbish can be seen anywhere．Besides，it's common that the young or middle-aged sit on the bus when the elderly have to stand．
Measure must be taken to change this situation．First of all，as students，we should manage our own behaviors but help people around you form good habits．Meanwhile，it is necessary for the government and some organizations to encourage people to behave proper．
Don't undervalue the role we can play with．Do remember we can make difference!Take action right now!
分析 本文主要讲述了人们的一些举止违背了公道德，比如，随地吐痰，乱扔垃圾等．作为学生，我们应当帮助我们周围的人养成好习惯．记住：我们也能起作用．
解答 Nowadays we can still see some behaviors against public morals．As was often the case，people tend to talk loud in public places，annoyed others around．Spitting and littering rubbish can be seen anywhere．Besides，it's common that the young or middle-aged sit on the bus when the elderly have to stand．
Measure must be taken to change this situation．First of all，as students，we should manage our own behaviors but help people around you form good habits．Meanwhile，it is necessary for the government and some organizations to encourage people to behave proper．
Don't undervalue the role we can playwith．Do remember we can make∧difference!Take action right now!
详解：
1．was改为is 考查固定搭配．as is often the case意为"这是常有的事"，是固定搭配，as引导定语从句．
2．annoyed改为annoying 考查现在分词．people与annoy之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
3．anywhere改为everywhere 考查词语用法．根据句意：吐痰和扔的垃圾到处都能看到．用副词everywhere．
4．when改为while/but 考查连词．前后两个单句之间是转折关系，而非从属关系，用连词while/but．
5．Measure改为Measures 考查名词复数．measure是可数名词，表示采取的措施不止一种，用复数形式．
6．but改为and 考查连词．manage与help是并列关系，用and连接构成并列谓语．
7．you改为us 考查代词．根据句意：帮助我们周围的人养成好习惯．用代词us．
8．proper改为properly 考查副词．behave是动词，要用副词修饰．
9．去掉with 考查介词．we can play是定语从句，修饰role，play the role意为"起作用"，是固定搭配．
10．加a 考查冠词．make a difference意为"有影响； 起（重要）作用"，是固定搭配．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
