Question

【题目】假定你是李华，现在你们学校打算请外教露西来担任你校寒假英语冬令营的口语老师。请你给露西写封邮件，内容包括：

1.时间：2017年1月10号到1月25号

2.授课内容：上午口语课，下午室外活动，如参观博物馆，游览公园等

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：英语冬令营 an English Winter Camp

4.开头已为你写好

Dear Lucy,

How are you?

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy，

How are you? My name is Li Hua, whom you taught oral English when I was in

Senior 1. Now our school asks me to invite you to come to our school to be an oral English teacher for the English Winter Camp during the winter vacation. Here are some

details about the activity.

The camp will start from January 10 to 25,2017. You can come a few days before January 10. In the morning you will give three oral English classes so you are expected to get ready for different topics to communicate with the students. In the afternoon there

are mainly outdoor activities such as having some picnics and visiting parks and museums, etc. You can also take the chance to travel more in China.

I hope you will accept the invitation and have a happy winter holiday.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求你给外教露西写一封邮件，邀请她来担任你校寒假英语冬令营的口语老师。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句whom you taught oral English和are expected to和take the chance等词汇。