Question

【题目】某英文网站向中学生征稿。轻你写一篇英文稿件，介绍中秋主要活动。写作要点如下：

1. 每年农历八月十五是中国的中秋节；

2. 它是中国的传统节日之一；

3. 家人团聚，赏月、吃月饼；

4. 旅游、访友等其他活动。

注意：词汇100-120，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中秋节the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历lunar calendar

赏月admire the moon 月饼moon cake

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Answer 1

【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.

Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when we admire the moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit , sharing our stories.

In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给英文网站投稿，介绍中秋主要活动。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 内容完整。介绍中秋节的举办时间，节日的重要性以及中秋的主要活动。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：中秋节举办时间和广泛性；第二段：中秋节主要活动；第三段：中秋节其他活动。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：状语从句Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.；主语从句和定语从句的使用What we love most is the time when we admire the moon together.；with的独立结构和现在分词作伴随状语With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit , sharing our stories.。2.使用了重要短语： In addition to除…以外；a wider range of更广泛的范围。