Question

17．短文改错
Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium，there I met some young America tourists．
I greeted to each other and began to chat．From chat I learned that they were college students study at Beijing Language University．They all seem to love Chinese culture．As walking，they were busy taking picture of the Stadium．
Apparently，we were impressed by the grand gym．But then I felt very proud that China was becoming more and more  attractive for foreigners．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者通过描述自己上周日在鸟巢遇见美国游客（也是北京语言大学的留学生）的经过，主要表达了自己对中国能够越来越受到外国人的青睐而感到自豪的心情．

解答 Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium，there I met some
                                                                       where
young America tourists．I greetedto each other and began to chat．
          American                        去掉to   
From∧chat I learned that they were college students study at Beijing
      the                                                                     studying 
Language University．They all seem to love Chinese culture．
                                              seemed
As walking，they were busy taking picture of the Stadium．
                                                     pictures
Apparently，wewere impressed by the grand gym．But then 
                  they                                                 And  
I felt very proud that China was becoming more and more 
 attractive for foreigners．
                to 
1．将there改为where    考查关系副词的用法   根据句意"上个星期日，我去了鸟巢体育馆，在那里我遇到了一些年轻的美国游客"以及此处之前的逗号可知，本句是非限定性的定语从句；由于先行词the Bird's Nest Stadium在从句中作地点状语；故用关系副词where
2．将America改为American   考查形容词的用法  此处用来修饰名词tourists，故用形容词American
3．去掉to    考查动词的用法   由于greet是及物动词，故应去掉to
4．在chat前加the   考查定冠词的用法   根据上文可知，此处的chat表示特指：在鸟巢，我与美国游客的聊天；故用the
5．将study改为studying  考查现在分词的用法   分析句意可知，此处在句中作后置定语修饰名词students，并且与该名词构成主谓关系，意为：在北京语言大学学习的大学生；故用studying  
6．将seem改为seemed   考查时态   根据上文讲述的是上周日的事情可知，此处应使用一般过去时；故用seemed
7．将picture改为pictures   考查名词的单复数"take picture"意为：拍照；此处指的是他们在忙于给体育馆拍照，因此这里指的不只是一张照片；故用名词的复数pictures 
8．将we改为they  考查人称代词    根据上文可知，此处描述的应是：宏伟的体育馆给那些年轻的美国游客们留下了深刻的印象；故用they
9．将But改为And    由于前一句表达的是美国游客对宏大的体育馆印象深刻；后一句表达了我因此而感到自豪，因此前后两句应表示并列关系；故用And
10．将for改为to    考查固定短语的用法      固定短语be attractive to sb．对某人有吸引力；故用to

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．