Question

【题目】作为一名高三学生，你或许经常跟你的父母就看电视问题闹矛盾。你的父母以学业繁重和影响视力等为由阻挠你看电视，而你又认为电视能满足你的兴趣爱好同时繁重的学业下也需要放松，最后你们之间相互妥协达成了一致意见。请你以该话题写一篇字数120左右的短文。

注意：1．就双方的理由可以进行适当的扩充，协议自己想象。

2．开头已写好，不计入字数

3．词数：120词左右

I am a Senior 3 student．I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school．

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【答案】I am a Senior 3 student．I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school．My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future．Besides，they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often，which is the chief cause of short sight．But in my view，it is TV that gives me something that I am interested in．In addition，it may relax my mind when I am tired，in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved．In the end we reached an agreement．Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV．However，the programs are limited to news，sports and entertainment，not including TV plays．This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life．

【解析】分析要求可知，作为一名高三学生，你或许经常跟你的父母就看电视问题闹矛盾。你的父母以学业繁重和影响视力等为由阻挠你看电视，而你又认为电视能满足你的兴趣爱好同时繁重的学业下也需要放松，最后你们之间相互妥协达成了一致意见。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。
文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：whether 引导的宾语从句，that引导的同位语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，in which case 、Only引导的倒装句等都很不错。