题目内容

假定你是李华,请根据以下要点用英语下一篇周记,记述你帮家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点:1. 做家务的理由;2. 做家务的过程; 3. 你的感受
注意:1. 短文字数不少于100字;
2. 开头部分一些好;但不计入总数;
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
I am an 17-year-old middle school student.

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Possible version:
I am an 17-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom help my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newsoaoers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this moment, my parents came back and were quite surprises to see all thebrooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

解析试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,首先要认真阅读题目。假定你是李华,请根据以下要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你帮家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点:1. 做家务的理由;2. 做家务的过程; 3. 你的感受
可知需要用第一人称来写,用一般过去时。需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求不少于100字,写的字数不要太多,也不能太少。
考点:提纲类作文
点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

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