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3．科技与生活息息相关，为我们带来快捷便利．请结合实际，以"My Technologically-enriched Life"为题，谈一谈科技如何丰富了你的生活．

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分析 本文属于议论文写作，人称以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时．写作要求为"结合实际，以"My Technologically-enriched Life"为题，谈一谈科技如何丰富了你的生活"，写作时要结合生活中的实际情况全面阐述科技为我们的生活带来的便利．
重要词汇：decades of （几十年的）； indulge in（沉溺于）； in a fantastic way（以一种奇妙的方式）； is featured by （以…为特征）；in daily life （在日常生活中）；crowd into（涌入，挤入）；  in addition （另外，此外）；in a word（总之）．
高分句型：1．But now，we have indulged ourselves in a digital world which is full of information and fun．
                 which引导一个定语从句，先行词为a digital world．
                 2．We can buy everything①we need in our daily life online simply with several clicks and the next day the items ①we buy will be delivered to our door，②which greatly saves the trouble of crowding into the supermarkets and queuing to cash．
                 ①是定语从句，分别修饰everything和the items；②which引导一个定语从句，关系代词which指代上一句中提到的情况．
                 3．Just open the browser and everything we want to know and don't want to know will automatically come into eyes．
                  主句为everything will automatically come into eyes，we want to know and don't want to know 是一个定语从句，修饰主语everything．

解答 My Technologically-enriched Life
    Decades of years ago，we didn't have smart phones and pads．But now，we have indulged ourselves in a digital world which is full of information and fun（高分句型一）．I will tell you how technology has changed our life in a fantastic way．
    To begin with，technology has changed our concept of consumption，which is featured by e-business．We can buy everything we need in our daily life online simply with several clicks and the next day the items we buy will be delivered to our door，which greatly saves the trouble of crowding into the supermarkets and queuing to cash（高分句型二）．
    In addition，everyone is better-informed with the rapid spread of information．Just open the browser and everything we want to know and don't want to know will automatically come into eyes（高分句型三）．We watch films online，chat online and live online．It's hard to imagine what life will be like without technology．
    In a word，our life is enriched by great technology from which we definitely benefit a lot．How important technology is to our life!（总结）

点评 本题属于议论文写作，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确要点．2、注意将叙述、描写等手法结合到议论中，为议论提供依据．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．