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【题目】假如你叫李华，爱好旅游，是青旅社的一名义工，请围绕“Volunteer Travel”这个主题，给《中学生英语报》写一封信，内容要点如下：

在国内外，游行游玩时做义工
优点	食宿免费，节省开支，体验文化
缺点	居住条件一般，因陌生而缺乏安全感
你的看法	……

要求：1．词数不少于80；

2．在答题卡上作答。

参考词汇：青旅社youth hotel

Dear Editor,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m Li Hua,a versatile girl who Is int a bunch of eye-opening activities such as travelling.As volunteer travel,familiar to foreigners,is gaining more and more popularity among Chinese folks, I’d like to share some thoughts on it.

Volunteer travelling presents an once-in –a –lifetime opportunity to work for youth hotels while appreciating the local scenery in leisure time as well as experiencing exotic culture,something you cannot get via atravel agency.Moreover,the free food and accommodation are just too good to ignore,since we all know what a big financial decision it usually is to travel abroad.

To be fair, fantastic as the activity is,it’s not without its flaws.As the saying goes:“There is no such thing as a free lunch.”While we actually “enjoy ”the free meals,we just have to make do with the terrible living conditions of the shabby dormitory and endure the insecurity of living in a completely strange place with no family or friends around.

Now you know the downside of this activity,but I hope it doesn’t give you cold feet.Because life is too short,we should see more of the world when we still can .Carpe diem.

Yours sincere,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达是图表类作文，根据提示信息围绕“Volunteer Travel”这个主题，给《中学生英语报》写一封信。写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，明确几个要点：做义工的优点，缺点和你的看法2.图表是文章的总体框架，在图表的范围内进行分析构思和想象。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子是时态，语态；就本文而言应该使用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

亮点句子：

1. I’m Li Hua, a versatile girl who Is int a bunch of eye-opening activities such as travelling. who引导定语从句修饰先行词girl。

2. Because life is too short, we should see more of the world when we still can .Carpe diem. because引导原因状语从句，when引导时间状语从句。