第二卷写作第一节:短文改错(共10小题.每小题1分.满分10分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断.每行均有一个错误.请按以下情况进行改正: 该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词.并也用斜线(﹨)划掉, 该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词, 该行 � 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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第二卷

写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉；

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；

该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Dear Tracy,

Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 76._______

me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77._______

He is very strict in me and often punishes me for 78 _______

leaving things lying around in the house when he did this 79._______

all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80._______

follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.” 81._______

Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, 82._______

making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 83._______

bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk 84._______

with him but he never listen. Please, help me. 85._______

Puzzled

76. 去掉Although或but 77. carelessly→careless

78. in→with 79. did→does

80. 在all后加the 81. Doing→Do

82. 去掉 more 83. hurting→hurt

84. how→what 85. listen→listens

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第二卷
写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉；
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Tracy,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats              76._______
me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions.           77._______
He is very strict in me and often punishes me for                78 _______
leaving things lying around in the house when he did this         79._______
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to               80._______
follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.”          81._______
Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests,      82._______
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t            83._______
bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk              84._______
with him but he never listen. Please, help me.                 85._______
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第二卷写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10 处错误，每个1分，满分10分）
There have some changes in sports in our school. Now we
have more than two P.E. class a week, and we have at most one
hour to exercise in every day. Students get so exciting at these
changes. More and more students take active part in the ball games,
running and jumping on the playground. Our school life is become
more colorful. Doing sports are a good way to relax and keep fit.
What’s more, a health body can help us study better or live a happier life.

第二卷写作（共两节，满分35分）

短文改错（共10 处错误，每个1分，满分10分）

There have some changes in sports in our school. Now we

have more than two P.E. class a week, and we have at most one

hour to exercise in every day. Students get so exciting at these

changes. More and more students take active part in the ball games,

running and jumping on the playground. Our school life is become

more colorful. Doing sports are a good way to relax and keep fit.

What’s more, a health body can help us study better or live a happier life.