Question

假如你是Jay，你的好友Jack因两次考试成绩不理想而烦恼, 发来e-mail向你倾诉。请根据下列内容写一封e-mail作为答复。       
1.不必沮丧，认真分析失败原因。
2．增强自信心，避免犯同样的错误。
3．失败是成功之母，只要努力而不放弃，迟早会成功的。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译。2. 字数100左右。
Dear Jack,
I’ve received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now.
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes and good luck.
Yours,

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I’ve received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now. However, I don’t think it necessary for you to be so disappointed for failing twice. You see, we still face many more exams in the future even if we leave school. So try the following:
Collect the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before, and analyze them carefully. Try to avoid making them again in the next exam. Make good preparations and be confident.
As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Let every failure be your stepping stone. If you try your best and don’t give up, you are sure to succeed in time.
Best wishes and good luck.
Yours, Jay

解析试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信类书面表达，审题后可知，文章的要点都已经给了出来，只需要翻译即可，可以分三段来写。失败原因，提出建议，总结，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。可以适当使用谚语，如：As we all know, failure is the mother of success.
考点：考查提纲类短文写作
点评：本文属于书信，也是提纲类短文的一种，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。