假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Childhood is a time when there are little duties．If a child has good parents，he is fed，looked after，and loved no matter when he may do．It's impossible for him to be given such much again in his later life．But a child is not so free to do as he wishes it．He is continually being told not to do this，not to do that，or being punished for what he had done wrong．
When the young man starts to make their own living，he becomes free from the rules of school and parents．Therefore，he can no longer expect others to pay his food，his clothes，and his room．He has to work hard to live comfortable．If so，he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society．

分析文章大意：童年的时候是拥有很少职任的时候，如果一个孩子有好的父母，那么他会得到喂养，照顾和爱．但是另一方面，一个孩子可能他经常
被告诉不做某事．或者因为做错事而被处罚．当年轻人开始谋生，他就不会受到学校家长的束缚，但同时，他不再能指望别人来支付他的食物，衣服，和其他的事情，他通过努力工作，过上舒适的生活，如果这样的话，他可以拥有建立自己的社会地位巨大的幸福．

解答 Childhood is a time when there are little duties．If a child has good parents，he is fed，looked after，and loved
                                                   few
no matter when he may do．It's impossible for him to be given   such much again in his later life．But a child is not
             what                                                                          so
so free to do as he wishes it．He is continually being told not to do this，not to do that，or being punished for what he had  done wrong．
                                    去掉                                                                                                                                     has
When the young man starts to make their own living，he becomes free from the rules  of school and parents．Therefore，
                                                     his                                                                                                       However
he can no longer expect others to pay∧his food，his clothes，and his room．He has to work hard to live comfortable．
                                                      for                                                                                                 comfortably
If so，he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society
                                                             building

1．little--few 考查形容词的形式，little修饰不可数名词，而本句中是可数名词复数，所以要用few．
2．when--what，考查状语从句． no matter…在本句中引导让步状语从句，后面do缺少宾语，所以用 no matter what．
3．such--so 考查副词． so用来修饰形容词或副词，such一般修饰名词或名词短语，但是遇到有much，many，little，few时，需要用so．
4．去掉wishes后面的it，考查代词． wish的宾语已经有了，所以去掉it．
5．had--has 考查时态．本文上下文用一般现在时态，所以这里如果用完成时态的话，那么应该用现在完成时．所以用has．
6．their--his 考查人称代词，前面是the young man为主语，所以后面的物主代词应该是his．
7．Therfore--However，考查副词．前后之间是转折关系，有逗号隔开，所以用however．
8．pay 后面加上for，考查介词搭配． pay for是固定短语．
9．comfortable--comfortably 考查副词．本句中是修饰动词，所以用副词形式．
10．build--building 考查动名词．介词of后面应该用动名词作宾语．

点评改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．