Question

12．假设你是某校中学生李华，积极响应校学生会发起的"圆贫困地区孩子一个读书梦"的倡议．请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，以便在学校英语角交流．要点如下：
1．你对活动的认识；
2．具体做法：捐赠书籍、生活学习物品等，保持联系交流…．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
I think reading is important in the whole life．On one hand，There are many benefits of reading，which can increases our knowledge and learn the world affairs without going out．On the other hand，reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon，which is important to job hunting in the future．Last but not least，reading helps us become self-cultivation that would be beneficial to our whole life．
Therefore，this activity is very imoortant．No matter how poor the children in the village are，we should try our best to help them．We can donate books，study materials to them and keep in touch with them．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于圆贫困地区孩子一个读书梦的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：你对活动的认识；具体做法：捐赠书籍、生活学习物品等，保持联系交流…．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为对活动的认识．第二部分为具体做法．
重点短语与句型：
On one hand一方面
On the other hand另一方面
job hunting 寻找工作
Last but not least最后但同样重要
高分句型一：On one hand，there are many benefits of reading，which can increases our knowledge and learn the world affairs without going out..此句用了which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：No matter how poor the children in the village are，we should try our best to help them 此句用了no matter+疑问词，引导让步状语从句

解答 I think reading is important in the whole life．On one hand，there are many benefits of reading，which  can increases our knowledge and  learn the world affairs without going out．（高分句型一）On the other hand，reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon，which is important to job hunting in the future．Last but not least，reading helps us become self-cultivation that would be beneficial to our whole life．（对活动的认识）
Therefore，this activity is very important．No matter how poor the children in the village  are，we should try our best to help them （高分句型二）．We can donate books，study materials to them and keep in touch with them．（具体做法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．