Question

【题目】假如你是李华，正在英国留学。你的朋友小林高中毕业后打算到英国留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。

请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：

1．语言是道硬门槛；

2．适应能力很重要；

3．兴趣爱好被看重；

4．要有社会责任感。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Xiao Lin,

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.______________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Xiao lin,

I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What's more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第二段是本文的主体，用给出的提示作为你的英国留学的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.非限制性定语从句的使用：the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses.连接词的使用也是亮点：As far as I know, Besides, What's more, Last but not the least。