Question

假如你是李华，一名刚刚进入高三的学生。2014年高考在即，面对压力，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上以书信的形式表达出来。内容要点如下：

知心话	对父母的感谢	感谢他们倾注关爱，关心鼓励
对父母的希望	1. 和他们多交流，使自己保持良好状态
2. 创造条件，给自己提供实时帮助
学习打算	考生自拟（至少写两点）

注意：

短文须包括以上所有内容要点。

词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mom and Dad,

   The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could

have a heart-to-heart talk with you.                                                             

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

Yours ever

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mom and Dad,

The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.

To begin with, I am grateful to all the love, care and encouragement you have given me all these years. Meanwhile, it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me. In this way, I can always be in a good state in the coming year. Besides, I also hope that you can create necessary conditions, thus providing me with timely help.

   For my part, I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my studies and, if any problem arises, turn to my teachers immediately. What’s more, I will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low. After all, a balanced development is essential in the college entrance examination.

Yours ever,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。要注意用正确的时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如around the corner ，communicate with ，am determined to, am grateful to, pay special attention to,还运用了if，where引导的状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：To begin with，In this way，Besides, What’s more等等。

考点：提纲作文。