假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分．
I know you had trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First，you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time，never fail to listening to other people's views．Second，you should learn your classmates'likes and dislikes．Only in this way will you be able to get to know more differently people and show them that you are actually very frienly．Last but not least，I will always ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together，when I can introduce you to others．
As time goes on，people will know yourself better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter．

分析短文大意：本段话是一封书信．作者Peter了解到他的朋友在与别人沟通方面有麻烦，并且经常感到孤独，Peter认为他的朋友刚来到，别人对他不了解，因此给他提出了几条建议：第一，要积极参加讨论，发表一些观点，同时还要倾听别人的观点．第二，了解同学们的喜好．第三，Peter会去帮助他的朋友，一起参加一些活动，这样别就好跟他交朋友．

解答 I know you hadtrouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely．
That's why you are new here and people don't know about you．
But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．
First，you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．
At the same time，never fail to listening to other people's views．
Second，you should learn your classmates'likes and dislikes．
Only in this way will you be able to get to know more differently people and show them that you are actually very frienly．
Last but not least，I will∧always ready to help you．
We can take part in some activities together，whenI can introduce you to others．
As time goes on，people will know yourself better and be willing to make friends with you．
Best regards．
Peter．
1．had改为have 考查时态．根据前后语境及整体文章时态分析，此处应用一般现在时，因此要把had改为have．
2．why改为because 考查连词．根据上一句语境分析，此处要表达的意思是"这是因为你是新来的"，应该用that's because…，而that's why意思是"那就是为什么…"，与语境不符，因此应该吧why改为because．
3．advices改为advice 考查名词．advice是一个不可数名词，因此不能用复数形式．
4．a改为an 考查冠词．此处active的读音是以元音音素开头的，因此应该用an．take an active part in意为"积极参加"
5．listening改为listen．考查非谓语动词．此处fail to中的to是不定式符号，因此后面要用动词原形．
6．differently改为different．考查形容词．此处要表达的意思是"知道更多不同的人"，用different修饰people，表示不同的人；而differently是副词．
7．when改为where 考查关系副词．此处是一个非限制性定语从句，定语从句中缺少状语，先行词some activities是一个抽象的地点名词，应用where引导，表示"在这些活动中"．
8．always前面加上be 考查动词及固定词组．will是情态动词，后面要加动词原形，又因为be ready to do sth．是固定短语，因此always前面要加上be．
9．on改为by 考查副词及固定词组．go by"经过；流逝"，as time goes by意思是"随着时间的流逝"，符合题意；而go on意思是"继续"，与语境不符．
10．yourself改为you 考查代词．根据语境可知，此处的意思是"随着时间的推移，人们会对你更加了解，并且愿意跟你交朋友"，因此把yourselves改为you．