Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分。

Several years before, my friend and I drove to Chicago to pay a visit our other friends. We noticed that there was a homeless man sitting at an exit of the subway. So we bought some food and gave them to him. When he saw what we have bought for him, he became exciting with joy. After seeing his reaction, my friend and I decided to help more people. One night we packed up sandwiches or bottles of water, looking for people whom were in need. When I saw the look of joy in the face of each person we helped, I was very pleased. It was one of the most amazing feeling in my life.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before → ago

【2】visit后加to

【3】an → the

【4】them → it

【5】have → had

【6】exciting→ excited

【7】or → and

【8】whom → who

【9】in→ on

【10】feeling→ feelings

【解析】

试题分析：通过短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题等。

【1】before → ago 考查连词。多少年以前用ago而不是before。

【2】visit后加to 考查动词。Pay a visit to sb拜访某人，为固定搭配。

【3】an → the 考查冠词。在这里地铁出口是特指，所以需用冠词the。

【4】them → it考查代词。这里it指代的是前面的food，为不可数名词，所以需用单数形式it指代。

【5】 have→ had。考查时态。这里需用过去完成时had done。

【6】exciting→ excited 考查形容词。be excited with对……很兴奋，exciting修饰物，excited修饰人。

【7】or → and 考查连词。这里Sandwiches和water是并列关系，or表示选择关系，and表示顺承，并列关系。

【8】whom → who 考查关系代词。Whom在定语从句中做宾语，who在定语从句中做主语，该句缺少主语。

【9】in → on考查介词的时态。On the face of面对，为固定短语。

【10】feeling → feelings 考查名词复数。One of +复数名词，所以这里需用复数。