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15.读者王彬写信给某杂志"开心"栏目记者Mary,询问怎么才会感到幸福,请根据提示给他写一封回信,主题为How to Be Happy.
提示:1.幸福是人生最宝贵的东西.
2.凭良心做事,善待他人.
3.注重健康.
4.遇到挫折时要保持乐观.
注意:1.作文词数150个左右.
2.根据提示适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Wang Bin,
I'm glad to receive your letter,in which you asked me about how to be happy.I'm writing to tell you what I think about it.
In my opinion,happiness is the most precious thing in life.Without it,a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible.(高分句型一)How to be happy then?Firstly,doeverything out of conscience,and try to do it best,which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied.(高分 句型二)Secondly,treat others as you would have others do to you,that is to say,treat others sincerely.In addition,pay attention to your health,which is the root of success and happiness.(高分句型三)Remember it's no use being worried and sad.When you meet with some hard situation,you must try to overcome it without any hesitation.Last but not least,live every day in an optimistic way.If you share the ideas above with me,you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time.(高分句型四)
Best wishes,
Mary.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息读者王彬写信给某杂志"开心"栏目记者Mary,询问怎么才会感到幸福,请根据提示给他写一封回信,主题为How to Be Happy,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:幸福是人生最宝贵的东西.凭良心做事,善待他人.注重健康.遇到挫折时要保持乐观 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:In my opinion以我的观点来看;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;In addition另外;Last but not least最后同样最重要;pay attention to关注;be full of 充满了
Without it,a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible.(高分句型一)
Firstly,doeverything out of conscience,and try to do it best,which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied.(高分 句型二)
In addition,pay attention to your health,which is the root of success and happiness.(高分句型三)
If you share the ideas above with me,you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time.(高分句型四)

解答 Dear_Wang_Bin
I'm_glad_to_receive_your_letter,_in_which_you_asked_me_about_how_to_be_happy. I'm writing to tell you what I think about it.
In my opinion,happiness is the most precious thing in life.Without it,a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible.(高分句型一)How to be happy then?Firstly,doeverything out of conscience,and try to do it best,which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied.(高分 句型二)Secondly,treat others as you would have others do to you,that is to say,treat others sincerely.In addition,pay attention to your health,which is the root of success and happiness.(高分句型三)Remember it's no use being worried and sad.When you meet with some hard situation,you must try to overcome it without any hesitation.Last but not least,live every day in an optimistic way.If you share the ideas above with me,you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time.(高分句型四)
Best_wishes
Mary

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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