题目内容
假如英语课上老题要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除、或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每次错误以及修改均限一词；
.2、只允许修改10处，多者从第十一处起不计分
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