题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国网友Smith参加中国象棋网络挑战赛并荣获了一等奖。根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1、祝贺他获奖; 2、肯定他付出的努力; 3、询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺。
注意: 1. 字数 100 词左右。 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
“Everything comes to him who waits.”For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in wining the online competition! So I’m so pleased that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when it is convenient for you.
Congratulations again.
Yours,
LiHua.
【解析】本文是一篇邮件类作文。要求以李华的名义写一封英文电子邮件向美国网友Smith参加中国象棋网络挑战赛并荣获了一等奖表示祝贺,考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全:1、祝贺他获奖; 2、肯定他付出的努力; 3、询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺。注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇offer my sincere congratulations to,show great interest in,succeed in,pleased, convenient和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:80—120之间。
【范文亮点】①I just want you to know how glad I am at your success..宾语从句;②Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest倒装句。