Question

13．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习．七月份你将去北京参加暑
期中学生英语演讲比赛，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难．请根据以下要点给
Tom写一封电子邮件：
1．询问Tom的生活和学习情况；
2．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；
3．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，由于是讨论Tom现在的情况和自己的安排，所以应该以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主，用第一人称来叙述．主要分成三部分：一 询问Tom的生活和学习情况；二 自己的困难并请求Tom帮忙；三 自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It is reported that（引导主语从句） the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which（引导定语从句） is very different from that of your country
据说那里的天气又热又干燥，完全不同于你们国家的天气．
2．I am glad to tell you that （引导宾语从句）I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which（定语从句） is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself
我非常高兴的告诉你在七月份我要去北京参加一个英语演讲比赛，这不仅是一份荣誉，而且是提高自我的一个机会．

解答 Dear Tom，
      How time flies!You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month，during which you must have achieved a lot．Well，how's everything going？It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which is very different from that of your country（高分句型一）．Have you adapted to it？In addition，you once complained that the food served there was not to you taste．I hope that should have been improved（询问Tom的生活和学习情况）．
      I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself．（高分句型二） And now I try my best to make preparations for it．However，I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using of the language．I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems（自己的困难并请求Tom帮忙）．
      After the contest，I am to drop in at your school to visit you．Please waiting for my phone（自己的打算）．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．