题目内容
【题目】书面表达
现在,青少年肥胖现象越来越严重,很让父母担心。请你就这一现象,根据下面提示写一篇100字左右英语报道。
原因 | 1. 缺少运动 2. 饮食结构不合理 |
建议 | 1. 多参加体育锻炼 2. 多吃健康食品,远离垃圾食品 3. … |
参考词汇:肥胖:obesity 垃圾食品:junk food
要求:1. 对所有要点要适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2 开头已给出,不计入总数
Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. ________
【答案】
Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?
In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. Secondly, because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.
In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits, vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇正反利弊类的作文,文章贴近考生生活,具有时代性,生活性,思想性和可写性。要求学生描述出减肥在日常生活中的利弊,并谈谈自己的看法。看法要紧紧围绕主题,并适当运用各种高级词汇和连接词,并恰当运用多种句型。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in one’s opinion在某人看来;because of因为;lose weight减肥;Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do.这个句子运用到with的复合结构;Secondly, because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句;