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20．距离高考剩下不到100天的时间了，紧张的备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身、休息与高考备考之间的关系．请根据这一话题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的看法和建议．
注意：
1．词数120字左右，开头语已为你写好；    
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
   The College Entrance Examination is drawing near．_______________________________
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．要求根据所提供的材料，写出一篇短文，谈一谈在距高考剩下不到100天的紧张备考的阶段如何处理学习、健身、休息与高考备考之间的看法和建议．要点包括：目前学生的做法；给出建议；你的想法．
写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．
重要短语：connect …with…（把…和…结合起来），sacrifice sth （牺牲某事），resultsin （导致），be aware that （意识到…），in order to （为了…），get high scores （得高分），makepreparations for （做充分准备），relieve stress （缓解压力），by means of （通过…方式），in conclusion（总之）．
【高分句型】
1．In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to get high scores，which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning．
这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，逗号之前是主句，which在从句中作主句，指代前面整个主句的内容．
2．Just as a famous saying goes：all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．
这里运用了谚语，意为"只工作不玩，聪明的孩子也会变傻"．
3．We should be aware that nothing is more valuable than health which is a foundation of success．
这里是由否定词‘nothing'与比较级‘more valuable'连用表示最高级的含义，意为"我们的身体是最重要的"．句子含有which引导的定语从句，先行词为health，which在从句中作主语，指代health．
4．only when we have adequate rest and do some sports can we study more efficiently．
这里用了部分倒装，结构为"Only+when+从句状语成分+一般疑问句形式"．

解答 How to Get Prepared for theCollege Entrance Examination
The College Entrance Examination is drawing near． However，most students of senior three don't know how to connect rest，doing exercisewith study．In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to gethigh scores，which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning．【高分句型】（目前学生的做法）
Just as a famous saying goes：all work and no play makes Jack adull boy．【高分句型】Weshould be aware that nothing is more valuable than health which is a foundationof success．【高分句型】Therefore，on the one hand，we should make preparations for the exam fully andsystematically．On the other hand，we should relieve stress by means ofrelaxation and doing sports．（建议）
In conclusion，only when we have adequate rest and do some sportscan we study more efficiently．【高分句型】（看法）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．