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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Lantern Festival is celebrated in January 15of Chinese lunar calendar．It is the first full moon night in Chinese lunar year，symbolized the coming back of spring．It may be regarded as a last day of the Spring Festival，in another words，the Spring Festival does not end when Lantern Festival has passed．The busy atmosphere of the Spring Festival on that day show new visions and amorous feelings．It's regarded as a good day for family gather-together．According the folk custom of China，people on that night will lighten up fancy lanterns and go out of to appreciate the moon，set off firework，guess riddles writing on lanterns，and eat rice glue balls to celebrate the festival．

分析 本文主要介绍元宵节，于每年农历（lunar calendar）正月十五庆祝．元宵节之夜也是农历年第一个满月之夜，象征着春的回归，它被视为家庭团聚佳期．根据中国习俗，元宵节之夜，人们点亮精致的灯笼，外出赏月、放烟花、猜灯谜、吃元宵，庆贺佳节．

解答 Lantern Festival is celebrated in January 15of Chinese lunar calendar．It is the first full moon night in Chinese lunar year，symbolized the coming back of spring．It may be regarded as a last day of the Spring Festival，in another words，the Spring Festival does not end when Lantern Festival has passed．The busy atmosphere of the Spring Festival on that day show new visions and amorous feelings．It's regarded as a good day for family gather-together．According∧the folk custom of China，people on that night will lighten up fancy lanterns and go out of to appreciate the moon，set off firework，guess riddles writing on lanterns，and eat rice glue balls to celebrate the festival．
详解：
1．in改为on 考查介词．表示具体的某一天用介词on．
2．symbolized改为symbolizing 考查现在分词．it与symbolize之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
3．a改为the 考查冠词．last day后接介词短语of the Spring Festival作定语表示特指，用定冠词the．
4．another改为other 考查固定搭配．in other words意为"换句话说； 也就是说"，是固定搭配．
5．when改为until 考查连词．not until意为"直到…才； 在…以前不"，是固定搭配．
6．show改为shows 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态，且主语atmosphere是单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式shows．
7．加to 考查固定搭配．according to意为"按照；根据"，是固定搭配．
8．去掉of 考查词语用法．go out of意为"离开"，go out意为"出去"，此处应是：出去．
9．firework改为fireworks 考查名词复数．firework意为"烟火"，常用复数．
10．writing改为written 考查过去分词．riddles与write之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语written on lanterns作后置定语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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We hope that many future robot researchers and engineers will be born today.

1.What's the purpose of the Conference?

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D. To give opportunities for young robot lovers to visit the Tokyo International Exhibition Center.

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A. an International Robot Journal B. a robot show guide

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