假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Wise and warm-hearted,Mr. Smith taught me the history when I was in Grade 7. I shall never forget how he told me personally one day. He said, “Always aim high than you believe you can reach. If not,you’ 11 discover that when your talents be set free by your imagination,you can achieve any goal. If people offer their helps or wisdom as you go through life,accepting it gratefully. You can learn many from those who have gone before you. However,don't be afraid step off the accepted path and head off in your own direction unless your heart tells you that it’s the right way for you."

1. . .. taught me the history ... 去掉 the

2. . .. how he told me ... how →what

3. . .. aim high than ... high→ higher

4. If not,you* 11. .. not→ so

5. . .. be set free by ... be→are

6. . .. offer their helps ... helps→help

7. . .. accepting it gratefiilly. accepting→accept

8. . .. can learn many ... many→much

9. . .. be afraid step ... afraid 后加 to

10. . .. unless your heart unless→if

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Livestock(牲畜） cloning is the practice of cloning sheep,cattle and other livestock species as a way to improve efficiency. The basic idea behind livestock cloning is to clone animals that have certain qualities,such as cows that produce more milk or meat. 1 However,this practice is very controversial,and livestock farmers have been hesitant to adopt it fully because of public opposition and certain inefficiencies.

In technical terms,livestock are cloned by taking cells from one animal and using them to fertilize eggs(使卵子受精) .Scientists take the fertilized eggs and put them in female animals. 2 Many animals are bom with abnormal shapes. Scientists are looking for ways to improve the process and make it less expensive to adopt on a wider scale.

3 For example,if farmers were able to take only their very best animals and recreate them many times,they could potentially be more productive.

There are also some potential problems with cloned livestock. 4. For example,when a disease hits,there are usually individuals who cannot be harmed by the disease or are more resistant,and they will generally survive. If all the animals were genetically (在基因方面) identical or similar,this sort of disease could totally destroy an entire generation of livestock,leaving the world with a massive food shortage.

In addition to concerns about genetic diversity,there are other concerns about cloning. 5 There are also some people who worry that livestock cloning research may be a gateway to introducing human cloning,which is widely disapproved of.

A. Are the surviving clones really clones?

B. Therefore,the new species is expected to be better.

C. The biggest one arises from a reduction in genetic diversity.

D. Cloned livestock have the potential to provide some major benefits.

E. Cloning animals shows us what might happen if we try to clone humans.

F. These concerns sometimes come from worries over unforeseen consequences.

G. This process doesn't always work perfectly,and it can be relatively expensive.

We were heading home when I noticed my necklace,the birthday gift 1. (give) by my dad just one week 2. he passed away,was not around my neck.

We turned back to the beach. No one was there but an elderly man 3. (slow) walking over the sand with a metal detector in his hand. I raced up to him 4. asked if he had come across a necklace. The old man said I could write down my address and if he happened to come across my necklace he 5. (mail) it back to me. I gave him a $5 bill 6. postage and then raced back to my car to find something 7. (write) with and on,but when I ran back the old man was gone. I searched for a while but failed.

I turned down my husband's offer to buy

8. new one,as there could be no replacement. To our great surprise,three days after 9. (comb) the beach for the fourth time a package appeared inside our door. Insides 10. (be) a bill and my necklace.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

The girl I will always remember her is Mary,who was my classmate seven year ago. She was ： quiet,always greeted the teachers at our school and never spoke ill anyone. At that time,all the kids in my class included me were impolite,never listening to the teachers. Therefore,Mary was always so polite. One day I asked her what she wasn’ t like the rest of us so what she told me changed the way I acted. She said,uIf you ever want to be respectful in life,you have to respect others." Heard what she said,I started respecting others more and telling another people what I had been told.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My friend Linda and I have set up small organization called Delivering Smiles with my mother. Linda and I do all of the work like collect toys and picture books. Before a month of collecting these things,my mother takes us to the hospital that she works as a nurse. When we take what we had collected to the hospital,my mother brings us to differently children's rooms. We let each child pick out of what they want. We sit in each room for about ten minute,talking to and playing with each child. When I give a little of my time for children in the hospital and when I see their smiles,we feel quite happy.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

On behalf of the students are going on the trip to Valencia in October,I’d like to say thanks for your hard work in organized the trip. It looks great and we are all really looking forward for it. However,we are wondering that we can suggest one change. The Sunday after we will arrive,there is a motorcycle event and we all want to go. At a moment,we are scheduled to visit a zoo that day. Although we,re sure the zoo is really nice,there seems a pity to miss so a big event while we are there. We hope the change is possibly and thanks again for all your works.

Yours,

Lin Ling

中国的家长大都“望子成龙”，而厦门大学的易中天教授则认为，父母应该“望子成人”，并提出了成人的标准——真实、善良、健康、快乐。请用英语写一篇短文发表在某英文论坛上,表明你对此问题的看法，并说明理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

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假设你是李华。最近你在某国外网站购买了一本英语字典。收到后，你发现它存在以下问题:附带光盘(CD-ROM) 破损、一些页缺失、版本陈旧。请你给该网站的负责人写^封投诉信。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Chris is not a traditional explorer — he usually 61. (work) in an office for a large organization. Yet his job can sometimes be just 62. exciting and dangerous as being an explorer.

Chris is a doctor from France and he works for MSF,63. is also known as Doctors Without Borders. MSF sends trained doctors all over the world 64. (help) people after a war or a disaster.The organization received the Nobel Peace Prize in 1999.

Each year,more than 2,300 international staff join 65. (they) 34,000 locally hired colleagues to provide medical aid in countries around the world. All kinds of doctors can volunteer for MSF. They need to be 66. (prepare) to go almost anywhere and^ of course,they should expect difficult conditions. When MSF accepts a doctor for a task,he has to go for 67. least six months.

When 68. (ask) why he left a comfortable life and a good salary to join MSF,Chris said,aThe experience I gain is a great help in my career. Most 69. (important) , it is great to know at the end of each task,I have made a real 70.(different) to people's lives."

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