Question

17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This kind of thing happens a lot of in the city during winter，but she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next day it was a dead bird on the doorstep of her house．He thought it was just some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But the same thing happened for a week!She started to get angrily．So she sets up a hidden camera on the door，tried to find out the truth，which really gave her big surprise．The criminal was a cat!It left those dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要描述一个女孩发现她家门口总有一些死老鼠和死鸟，后来通过发现，原来是只猫所为．

解答 第一节  短文改错
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This kind of thing happens a lot of in the city
during winter，but she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next dayit was a dead bird 
                       so                                                                                     there
on the doorstep of her house．He thought it was just some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But 
                                             She                                             played
the same thing happened for a week!She started to get angrily．So she sets up a hidden camera on
                                                                                angry               set
the door，tried to find out the truth，which really gave herΛbig surprise．The criminal was a cat!
              trying                                                               a
It left those dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．
                         bodies
1．of去掉，考查固定搭配，a lot of"很多"，用来修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词，a lot用来修饰动词，此处用来修饰动词happens，因此去掉of．
2．but改为so，考查连词，前后关系为因果关系，不是转折．
3．it改为there，考查固定句型，此处指"有一只死鸟在她家的门口"，因此使用there be句型，表示"有"．
4．He改为She，考查人称代词，人称代词用错，前文指的是女孩，因此使用主格的She．
5．playing改为played，考查非谓语动词，此处非谓语动词play与其逻辑主语jokes构成被动的关系，因此使用过去分词充当后置定语，因此playing改为played．
6．angrily改为angry，考查形容词，表示"变得…"使用系动词get后加形容词，因此使用angry．
7．sets改为set，考查动词的时态，短文描述的是过去的动作，因此使用一般过去时，set的过去式是set．
8．tried改为trying，考查非谓语形式，此处非谓语动词try与其逻辑主语she构成主动的关系，因此使用现在分词短语trying充当伴随状语．
9．her后加a，考查冠词，此处surprise是可数名词，因此前使用不定冠词a．
10．body改为bodies，考查名词的复数，those修饰可数名词复数，因此body应使用复数形式．

点评 短文改错要具备两个基础，一是懂得分析句子结构，二是知道充当各个句子成分的词类或词性．并且注意人称代词，从句的引导词，名词单复数，和全文时态的理解，对于一些固定搭配，平时的学习中要多注意积累．