题目内容
8．假设你叫李华，是长沙市某中学学生．最近你在网上看到英国某中学在为即将来中国进行访学的学生征询寄宿家庭，你有意申请．请根据下表提供的信息用英语给该校相关部门写封信．1．自我介绍．
2．能够提供优越的条件，如住房宽敞、母亲善长烹饪等．
3．语言优势．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：寄宿家庭host family
Dear sir，
I am Li Hua，a student in Changsha，Hunan Province in China．I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）We will be very glad to show our foreign friends around．My mother is especially good at cooking，so our friends will have the chance to enjoy Chinese cuisine．Besides，as I'm good at English and my parents are both English teachers，we won't have any difficulty in communication．With what is mentioned above，I think we can be a good host family for your students．I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你叫李华，是长沙市某中学学生．最近你在网上看到英国某中学在为即将来中国进行访学的学生征询寄宿家庭，你有意申请．请根据下表提供的信息用英语给该校相关部门写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：自我介绍．能够提供优越的条件，如住房宽敞、母亲善长烹饪等．语言优势．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：places of interest名胜古迹；show sbaround领着某人参观；be good at擅长Besides另外；have difficulty in 在…方面有困难；
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）
I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）
解答 Dear sir，
I am Li Hua，a student in Changsha，Hunan Province in China．I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of your students．（高分句型一）
I live with my parents in a large and clean house within easy reach of some places of interest in Changsha．（高分句型二）We will be very glad to show our foreign friends around．My mother is especially good at cooking，so our friends will have the chance to enjoy Chinese cuisine．Besides，as I'm good at English and my parents are both English teachers，we won't have any difficulty in communication．With what is mentioned above，I think we can be a good host family for your students．I would greatly appreciate it if I could be offered the chance．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
