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On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9years'study，I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year，I made many friends．I got to know all of my  classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won't give out．

分析 本文作者在即将高中毕业之时，通过回顾高中三年以来的学习及生活情况，表明了自己会更加努力的学习，以取得更大的进步的决心．

解答 On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．
After 9 years'study，I felt I was so closely to university．
During the first year，I made many friends．I got to know 
all of my  classmates．Because the school work was tough．
I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When∧second 
year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that 
no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now 
it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to 
study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is 
challenging for me，but I won't give out．
详解：
1．exciting改为excited      考查由过去分词转化来的形容词    此处用在系动词felt之后作表语，描述的是主语I（指人）的感受；故用过去分词excited．
2．closely改为close   考查形容词     closely副词，接近地，亲近地；close形容词：靠近的，接近的；此处用在系动词was之后作表语，应使用形容词；故用close．
3．Because改为Though/Although      考查句意理解以及从属连词    本句的意思是：虽然学校里的学习很艰苦，但我和朋友们一起分享着快乐和悲伤；此处引导的是让步状语从句，故用Though/Although．     
4．for改为with    考查固定结构    share sth with sb意为：和某人分享某物；故用with．
5．在second 之前加the   考查定冠词    此处用在序数词second 之前，指的是：第二年；故在second 之前加the．
6．other改为another    考查不定代词    other：其他的；another：再一个，另一个；此处指的是另一个班；故用another．
7．was改为is    考查时态    根据句中的时间状语Now可知，此处指的是现在的情况；故用is．
8．but改为and    考查句意理解以及连词    本句的意思是：现在是我高中生活的最后一年，我决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；此处表示并列，并非转折关系；故用and．
9．去掉harder之前的more    考查副词的比较级   由于副词hard的比较级是harder，more是many/much的比较级，而两个比较级不能连在一起用；故去掉harder之前的more．
10．out改为in   考查固定短语    give out意为：分发；公布；用尽；give in意为：屈服，让步；本句的意思是：高中生活对我来说虽然是个挑战，但我不会屈服；故用in．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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