Question

10．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Henry，
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）（展览时间、地点）As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．（展览内容）During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．
Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．（殷切希望）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信，是很常见的考查写作能力的形式，写作难度不大．根据提示信息要求给外教Henry写信，邀请他参观中国剪纸艺术展．写作时注意以下几点：首先需要注意信件的写作格式规范，注意抬头和信尾的署名；其次要注意不能遗漏信件的要点．信中明确两个要点：1．展览的时间和地点；2．展览的内容．第三，写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态．最后，注意尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子，保持字迹工整、卷面整洁．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be delighted to do很高兴去做某事；As is well-known to us all众所周知；be interested in对…感兴趣；plan to do计划做某事；show sb around领着某人参观；enjoy yourself过得愉快；look forward to盼望
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）
As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）
I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Henry，
      I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）（展览时间、地点）As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．（展览内容）During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．
      Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．（殷切希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 提纲类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型．