Question

你校英文报社在“世界无烟日 (World No-Smoking Day)”前夕征集关于吸烟危害健康的英语文章，请你为其投稿。内容至少包括以下要点：
1．吸烟会危害自身及他人的健康；
2．世界卫生组织 (The WHO) 声称每年至少两百万人死于与吸烟有关的疾病；
3．呼吁：吸烟者戒烟；公共场所禁烟；青少年远离香烟……
首句已给出，可适当发挥。词数：120左右。
As is known to us all, smoking does harm to not only smokers themselves but also people around them.                                                                    
                                                                      

Answer 1

As is known to us all, smoking does harm to not only smokers themselves but also people around them. Smoking can lead to various diseases, like heart trouble, cancer and other problems. The WHO says diseases related to smoking kill at least two million people each year. Though it is not easy for the smokers to give up smoking, I hope they should try to stop smoking for the health of themselves and others. And our government should make laws which ban smoking in public places.
Since smoking is so harmful, I hope all the teenagers would not try to start to smoke and form healthy habits.  （106 words）

解析试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。写关于世界无烟日的文章，文章的要点都给了出来，考生需要做的就是把要点翻译成英语即可，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
考点：考查提纲类作文
点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。