Question

3．近来，越来越多的家长在学校附近租房陪读．21世纪报"Your Opinions"栏目近期就"Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？"进行征文，请根据下面的要求写一篇英语短文．内容包括：
1．描述陪读现象；
2．分析陪读现象产生的原因
3．就陪读现象作简短的评论并给出你的建议．
注意：1．词数100字左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
Dear editor，
                                            
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于越来越多的家长在学校附近租房陪读的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：描述陪读现象；分析陪读现象产生的原因；就陪读现象作简短的评论并给出你的建议．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为描述陪读现象．第二部分为分析陪读现象产生的原因．第三部分为就陪读现象作简短的评论并给出你的建议．
重点短语与句型：
develop a habit of养成习惯…
 do harm to  对…有害
Apart form除…外
keep track of追踪，跟踪
高分句型一：About 70% of students hold the point of view that their parents shouldn't accompany them in studying at school．此句用了that引导同为语从句，修饰view，观点的内容
高分句型二：I think it necessary for parents to offer a better living condition to the kids．，which can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．and get their kids into the habit of being dependent此句用了it作形式宾语以及非限制性定语从句

解答 Should our parents accompany us in studying at school？
Dear editor，
According to a recent survey about whether our parents should accompany us in studying at school，the students do have different opinions．（描述陪读现象）
About 70% of students hold the point of view that their parents shouldn't accompany them in studying at school．The reasons are following．（高分句型一）Firstly，With accompaning of parents make them develop a habit of reling，which is do harm to the development of their good study habit and develop self-control ability．Then accompany in studying at school for their childern affects their work and rest．Apart form this，there are about 30% students consider their parernts should accompany their in studying at school．At first，with accompaning of thier parents make them have more time to study，make their body health much better．Futhermore，their parents can press them to finish study tasks，encouraging them to overcome difficulties．（分析陪读现象产生的原因）
I think  it necessary for parents  to offer a better living condition to the kids．，which  can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．and get their kids into the habit of being dependent（．高分句型二）Meanwhile，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．Parents should create room for children's growth and study，in order to ensure their overall development．（就陪读现象作简短的评论并给出你的建议）

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第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．