Question

8．假设你是某中学的学生李华，最近参加了学校的"低碳生活社"．现在请根据社团有关章程，用英语写一封电子邮件给你的美国好友Jack，介绍你们社团及其活动情况．
写作内容

社团名称	低碳生活社
社团宗旨	低碳生活，从我做起
成员义务	衣：衣着朴素，收集旧衣赠灾区人民 食：在饭堂吃饭时按量取食，吃天然或简单包装食品 住：少用空调，使用节能灯，循环用水、纸张等 行：步行、骑自行车或使用公共交通工具 玩：选择能源消耗少的娱乐，如爬山、游泳、打球等

写作要求
1．只能用5个句子表达全部内容．
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
3．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
Dear Jack，
How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that I have recently joined the"Low-carbon
Living Club"in our school．Now let me tell you something about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，we encourage our club members to wear plain clothes and donatethe unneeded used ones to people in disaster-stricken areas． We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteen and choosingnatural or simply-packed food． As club members，we try to limit the use of air conditioners，use energy-savinglights and recycle used water and paper．What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take publictransportation as much as possible，which are very effective and environmentally friendly． Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmly convined that if everybody
can follow these，we will make world a better place．
Truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息给美国好友Jack写一封电子邮件，介绍社团及其活动情况，既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：join the club（即将到来），encourage sb to do （推荐什么给），donate …．to…．（提醒某人…．），advocate doing  （就我所知道的而言），try to do sth （结果是），environmentally friendly．（环保的），in one's spare time （在某人空闲时间），a great deal of （很多），take great delight in…（以…为乐）．
【高分句型】
1．we are expected to walk，cycleor take public transportation as much as possible，whichare very effective and environmentally friendly．
这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
2．I am taking great delight in doing these and Iam firmly convinced that if everybody can follow these，wewill make world a better place．
这里是由that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中又含if条件状语从句，we will make world a better place是宾语从句中的主句．sb be convinced that+从句  某人相信

解答 Dear Jack，
  How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that Ihave recently joined the"Low-carbon Living Club"in our school．（社团名称）Now let me tell yousomething about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，（社团宗旨）we encourage our club membersto wear plain clothes and donate the unneeded used ones to people indisaster-stricken areas．（衣） We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteenand choosing natural or simply-packed food．（食）As club members，we try to limit the use ofair conditioners，use energy-saving lights and recycle used water and paper．（住） What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take public transportation as much as possible，which are very effective andenvironmentally friendly．【高分句型】（行） Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．（玩）（社团义务）
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmlyconvinced that if everybody can follow these，we will make world a betterplace．【高分句型】（结尾）
Truly，
 Li Hua

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．