Question

11．假设你是李华，拟邀请美国朋友Mike七月份到你的家乡福建泉州参观游览．请你写一封邀请函，要点如下：
1．享受免费住宿；
2．游览名胜古迹；
3．品尝特色小吃（snack）；
4．感受当地历史文化和风土人情．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
                                                                 
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要审题，确定话题拟邀请美国朋友Mike七月份到你的家乡福建泉州参观游览．你写一封邀请函，时态用一般将来时，人称用第一人称．
写作要点：
1．享受免费住宿；
2．游览名胜古迹；
3．品尝特色小吃（snack）；
4．感受当地历史文化和风土人情．
写作注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
重点单词与短语：
1．hear from 收到来信
2．in the coming July 在即将到来的7月
3．free of charge 免费
4．places of interest 名胜古迹
5．as well as  和
6．Look forward to 期盼
高分句型：
1．It's been a long time since I last heard from you．
it has been some time（一段时间）+since引导的时间状语从句
该固定句型意思是"自从…以来已经多久时间了"．
如：It is two hours since he left the classroom．
自从他离开教室以来，已经两个小时了．
2．It will be a great pleasure for us to have you here．
it做形式主语．如：It is not a good habit to stay up too late．
3．I would be quite honored if you could accept my invitation．
if引导虚拟语气．句意：如果你能接受我的邀请，我将非常荣幸．

解答 Dear Mike，
   How is everything going？It's been a long time since I last heard from you．（高分句型）By this letter I would like to invite you to come to my hometown for a visit in the coming July after my college entrance exam．（介绍话题）
   It will be a great pleasure for us to have you here．（高分句型）  During your stay here，you will be offered accommodation，which is free of charge，and I will show you around some places of interest．We will try some famous local snacks and experience the local history and culture as well as our customs．I believe that you'll surely like my hometown．I would be quite honored if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型）（活动内容）
   Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇所给材料比较详细的提纲类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，同时要表达出自己的观点，可适当的发挥，在写作时要注意时态，人称，固定词组搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密，条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．